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Clouds. Fog.
The Darkness surrounding,
enveloping my soul,
overwhelming my thoughts,
restricting my movements,
controlling my mind.
Darkness, flooding my head
threw every pour.
The light can not shine
threw. It is blotted out
by my emotions.
The Night is falling,
falling over me.
The Darkness Surrounding.
©2005-2009 ~hellraiser18
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A little poem i wrote today, have not edited it at all. So, critique is welcome, and I will change it accordingly.

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im not much for poetry, but this is pretty nice

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Thanks a lot. I am going to put it as a Deviation now, everyone i've talked to likes it.

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